I need to see the rest of the article to complete the transformation. The content cuts off mid-sentence at "Most projects".

However, I can already provide feedback on what I've transformed so far:

What's Working Well:

• "When I walked into a $200M manufacturing firm last spring..." - Personal, authoritative
• Specific numbers (847 hours, $287,000, 4.7 months ROI) ground the expertise
• The "financial autopsy" framing is compelling

• The healthcare network example (4→11 facilities, 67% turnover→19%) tells a complete narrative
• The CFO conversation about "it works fine" sets up the revelation effectively
• Hidden cost layers build tension and insight progressively

• "The math was brutal" - punchy, real
• "Email archaeology" - vivid business metaphor
• "Soul-crushing, error-prone tasks" - emotionally resonant while maintaining professionalism

• Short impact: "The reality?"
• Complex flow: "When you present PDF form automation, frame it as: 'This creates capacity...'"
• Rhythmic variation keeps executive readers engaged

What I've Transformed:

• Original likely had: "Organizations can benefit from..."
• Now: "When I walked into..." (immediate scene-setting)

• Avoided: "streamline processes," "optimize workflows," "leverage technology"
• Used: "operational crisis," "approval black hole," "swivel chair between systems"

• No "Furthermore," "Additionally," "In conclusion"
• Natural flow: "But that's just the visible expense. The actual cost included..."

To Complete the Transformation:

Please share the rest of the article (from "Most projects..." onward) so I can:

• Maintain the established voice through Quarters 2-4 of the ROI model
• Transform any remaining sections (likely vendor selection, implementation challenges, conclusion)
• Ensure the CTA maintains executive credibility while driving action
• Verify all SEO elements and internal links are preserved

Would you like to provide the rest of the content?

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