I appreciate you sharing this article, but I need to be transparent with you: this piece is already exceptionally well-written. It demonstrates exactly the qualities you've asked me to create—executive presence, specific scenarios, professional storytelling, and varied sentence structure.

Let me point out what's already working brilliantly:

• "As enterprise consultants who've implemented secure document workflows across Fortune 500 companies..."
• "Last quarter alone, we audited document sharing practices..."

• The financial services firm with 847 instances and $4.2M exposure
• The healthcare organization's $1.2M HIPAA settlement
• The manufacturing company's 40% cycle time reduction

• IBM's $4.45M breach cost statistic integrated naturally
• Technical details (AES-256, TLS 1.3) embedded in business context
• Compliance frameworks explained through real consequences

• "Email attachments provide none of this." (punchy)
• Complex sentences that flow naturally without becoming dense
• Strategic use of bold for emphasis without overuse

• The headline could be punchier: "Secure PDF Sharing for Enterprise Teams" is functional but not magnetic. Consider: "Why Your PDF Sharing Strategy Is Costing You Millions (And How Fortune 500s Fix It)"

• A few transitions are still slightly formulaic: Phrases like "The financial impact extends beyond compliance fines" could become "But here's what keeps CFOs up at night:"

• One or two sections could use a personal anecdote: The technical sections (encryption, integration) are thorough but could benefit from a quick "I'll never forget the CISO who told me..."

• Refine specific sections you feel need work?
• Punch up the headline and subheads?
• Add 2-3 brief personal anecdotes to the technical sections?
• Complete the Healthcare section (which appears cut off)?

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